- I need to be more cautious of use of "modernism" and "post-modernism." This isn't necessary to publishing as publishing is more more populist rather than an art movement.
- I need to include what need magazines and newspapers fulfilled - how does it apply to the audience? This needs to be elaborated more in the essay for example magazines were about leisure and applied to the middle class more.
- Include photographs of images referenced within the text.
Thursday, 31 January 2019
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